Saturday, May 3, 2008

Random Story Peice

I walked down the quiet hall of school. Quiet?! Yeah, right. More like the hall of shouts and yelling. Also it was so crowded i had to shoulder my way through, trying not to drop the two books i held clutched to me. i was finally able to to reach the blue lockers on the sie of the hall. Locker #23, how does Fantasy make it there every day?
Easy, i guess. she walked over with ease and started opening the locker. "Dude..." i said "how do you do that?" She looked at me with a confused look.
"What?" she asked "open my locker?"
"No, no, no." i said, shaking my head, "i meant get here without being trampled by preps and cheerleaders?" she giggled and jerked her locker open.
"I trample them first." she joked.


that's all i'm going to show right now, i have two and a half more pages of that story but i'm good for any opinons on what is shown right now...

34 comments:

Rose Mary said...

*twitch* *twitch*

Jin said...

what?! it wasn't good...?

Rose Mary said...

yes. that's the problem.

Jin said...

hahaha! wee! i knew i could write a bad story! i knew it! *victory dance*

Rose Mary said...

huh?

Jin said...

i said i knew i could write a bad story

Rose Mary said...

yeah. I got that.

Jin said...

but i guess i can't...

Rose Mary said...

you probably could u just shouldn't do a fiction story. Do a text book style one. and, if i may just point out, someone finds almost everything interesting, if you get my meaning.

Jin said...

no i don't but this one isn't a fantasy or Sy-fi (or is that Si-Fy???). it's normal

Rose Mary said...

it's sci-fi. and do a story about something you don't like. something that's boring to you.

Jin said...

but i could make something boring exciting by accident!

out_of_this_world said...

yo guys im on now

Rose Mary said...

hi, um, whoever you are. I should probably know, huh?

Jin said...
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Rose Mary said...

Check under permissions. it show u.

Rose Mary said...

and stop using names!

out_of_this_world said...

zizi its me cici man i feel so loved right now lol

Jin said...

YES! i knew it was C.C. !!!!

Rose Mary said...

so did i. u could've just looked @ her email address.

out_of_this_world said...

so i cant remember but what do we do in this blog again?

Jin said...

i don't look at profiles, also, we tell about our stories/songs/anything, or put up random peices of them for people to say whether or not they're good and give advice to how it'll be better and stuff

out_of_this_world said...

ok cool. :)

Jin said...

yep, that's it

Jin said...

wow, 24 comments, we need a new post. you wanna do it Out_of_this_world?

out_of_this_world said...

sure i'll just put up one of my poems

out_of_this_world said...

nevermind i cant find them. oh we should get kyky on this you know her new book and all that is freakin awsome

Jin said...

nope, too long. just put up some random story thing or whatever

Jin said...

p.s. Out_Of_This_World nice pic

out_of_this_world said...

thanks jin and ill think of something if i do ill try to post it tomorrow

Jin said...

good thing too, this post has 31 comments including this one

Rose Mary said...

who's kyky?

Jin said...

Kyky is short for...think about it. i'll just tell you, IT'S CALIBER!!!!!! DUH!

Rose Mary said...

aoh.