Thursday, May 29, 2008

Alone

Woke up in a strange place
Where darkness all surounds
Heard a faint, lonely voice
And my heart started to pound

Then i heard a silent scream
From somewhere in the dark
But i knew that i was the only one there
So the coldness left its mark

I couldn't see anything
No shining light at all
So i closed my eyes and knew
That i was about to fall

Alone in a quiet place
Alone so all alone
And knowing that there's no one else
That scream had been my own

9 comments:

StAr said...

that sent a shiver up my spine.

its scary and sad. its really well written, 9 and a half out of ten.
this one is kainda emo too, not much though.

Jin said...

YAY! i got a 9 1/2!! WHOO! that makes me feel happy. and i dun think i did very good on that one either.

Rose Mary said...

what happened?

Jin said...

what do you mean what happened? nothing happened really

out_of_this_world said...

JIN, ROSE i missed you guys so much how have you been? and hi star long time no talk. well for me. sorry also my computer wouldnt let me log in.

Rose Mary said...

hi, ootw. how ya doin?

StAr said...

long time no see, as well out_of_this_world. i still like the poem. its gurrrrdddddd. (thats my new way of saying good)

out_of_this_world said...

tahts a cool way. and im good

Jin said...

YAY! people like my poems, i feel happy..ish