Sunday, September 7, 2008

The Truth about lies: Another side to this world

Here's a part of my new book I came up with. I got bored and decided to do another, more exciting cross between the dreamers world and our world. It's a school in the middle of Salt Lake City... but it's exclusively for magical creatures. In human form, of course. I'll start it now!


(Part of Chapter one, just got bored and havn't written the beggining of it yet)

"That's Fang," Jenna said, nodding in the direction of a pale, spacey-looking girl. Another girl sitting with her back to her had wolf ears- light brown ones. Her eyes were yellow and she looked like she was bored, her elbow on the table with her head resting on her fist. "The girl sitting next to her is Jax. Her real name is-" The girl, Jax, suddenly snarled, baring large, intimidating canine teeth. My breath caught in my throat and I jumped back. She was a werewolf! Of course! Jax's brown hair seemed to bristle. "Well, I'll let her tell you that... when she wants too." Jax had jumped up on the table, going into full wolf form, her face just inches from Jenna's. Jenna's blue eyes were alarmed, but not afraid. "Fang doesn't say much, but she's there." Fang didn't flinch at the sound of her name, but somehow I knew she was listening. I coulnd't help but stare at Fang. She was so pretty. Her skin was a dark tan, and her hair was black with red and white streaks- the school colors, I realized.
Ice shot across the table to where I was sitting, encasing me in ice but stopping at my neck. I gasped. Fang turned slowly to look at me.
"Why are you staring?" She asked slowly, her green eyes flecked with copper slowly turning to a deep brown. I was stunned. Was she a vampire? When I didn't answer, her eyes narrowed.
"I said, why are you staring?"

11 comments:

Jin said...

i love it adeen, so cool!

Jin said...

I love the title. The Truth About Lies. So perfect.

Adeen said...

thanks, Jin. I decided it was more exciting and less dramatic than Armaggedon nightmares... i couldn't take the drama! uh! it could have been a really good book but this just seemed so much more exciting.

Jin said...

yeah, i agree

Rose Mary said...

sweeeet.

and can I maybe do a version of armaggedon nightmare if you're not gonna?

Jin said...

yes, let RM do it.

Rose Mary said...

that would be fun. don't know if it would ever get finished, though...

Jin said...

who cares? just go for it RM!

Rose Mary said...

w/e if I'm doing it y'all have 2 help me. write your own versions of what happens. I'm awful at imagining the reactions of real people. i usually don't even try.

Krosemarie said...

This is such good writing!! I really love it.....



Rose Mary, btw, thanks for your comments on my poetry blog, it really means a lot!!!


Krosemarie

Adeen said...

go for it. I'm not gonna finish it. I can't take the teenage drama! I can't take it! especially Adeen she thinks it's hilarious.