Woke up in a strange place
Where darkness all surounds
Heard a faint, lonely voice
And my heart started to pound
Then i heard a silent scream
From somewhere in the dark
But i knew that i was the only one there
So the coldness left its mark
I couldn't see anything
No shining light at all
So i closed my eyes and knew
That i was about to fall
Alone in a quiet place
Alone so all alone
And knowing that there's no one else
That scream had been my own
9 comments:
that sent a shiver up my spine.
its scary and sad. its really well written, 9 and a half out of ten.
this one is kainda emo too, not much though.
YAY! i got a 9 1/2!! WHOO! that makes me feel happy. and i dun think i did very good on that one either.
what happened?
what do you mean what happened? nothing happened really
JIN, ROSE i missed you guys so much how have you been? and hi star long time no talk. well for me. sorry also my computer wouldnt let me log in.
hi, ootw. how ya doin?
long time no see, as well out_of_this_world. i still like the poem. its gurrrrdddddd. (thats my new way of saying good)
tahts a cool way. and im good
YAY! people like my poems, i feel happy..ish
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