tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307724924686965242.post7319489440650602431..comments2023-04-04T07:37:17.580-07:00Comments on Stories: Chapter 2Machttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05713965301709807807noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307724924686965242.post-25105789999206743622008-05-28T09:39:00.000-07:002008-05-28T09:39:00.000-07:00yeah, i'll fix that sentence. it confused even me!...yeah, i'll fix that sentence. it confused even me! and yes, chapter 3 is going up today!Decemberflowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06870909201220831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307724924686965242.post-63200107127613750662008-05-27T20:30:00.000-07:002008-05-27T20:30:00.000-07:00pretty good. i think you should re-word the senten...pretty good. i think you should re-word the sentence, "I had what little homework I had completed,"<BR/>it's just really confusing and i think it could be better. are you putting 3 up soon?!<BR/>-Christine♥Beachbumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17984114421048206056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307724924686965242.post-1206183608430766112008-05-26T14:30:00.000-07:002008-05-26T14:30:00.000-07:00yes, i know chapter 2 isn't that excitingyes, i know chapter 2 isn't that excitingDecemberflowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06870909201220831039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3307724924686965242.post-9974887612104406342008-05-26T10:16:00.000-07:002008-05-26T10:16:00.000-07:00it's one of those...wait for it, something's gonna...it's one of those...wait for it, something's gonna happen chapters, when nothing happens but you're just expecting something to. anyway, chapter 3 is when the something happens, chapter 2 is just building up for it...Decemberflowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06870909201220831039noreply@blogger.com